Commit a5ba7b11 authored by Holger Wansing's avatar Holger Wansing

More fixes/corrections by Beatrice Torracca (part2), thanks.

See https://lists.debian.org/debian-doc/2016/06/msg00001.html
and follow-ups
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<p>Yes. Debian-derived distributions are being created both in close
cooperation with the Debian project itself and by external parties. One can
use the <url id="http://cdd.alioth.debian.org/" name="Custom Debian
Distributions"> framework to work together with Debian; <url
id="http://www.skolelinux.org/" name="Skolelinux"> is one such project.
use the <url id="https://www.debian.org/blends/" name="Debian
Pure Blends"> framework to work together with Debian; <url
id="https://wiki.debian.org/DebianEdu/" name="DebianEdu/Skolelinux"> is
one such project.
<p>There are several other Debian-derived distributions already on the market,
such as Progeny Debian, Linspire, Knoppix and Ubuntu, that are targeted at a
such as grml, LMDE (Linux Mint Debian Edition), Knoppix and Ubuntu, that are
targeted at a
different kind of audience than the original &debian; is, but use most of our
components in their product.
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particularly GNU tools, is available not in `man' pages, but in `info'
files which can be read by the GNU tool <tt>info</tt>, by running
<tt>M-x info</tt> within GNU Emacs, or with some other Info page viewer.
<p>Its main advantage over the original `man' pages are that it is
<p>Its main advantage over the original `man' pages is that it is
a hypertext system. It does <em>not</em> require the WWW, however;
<tt>info</tt> can be run from a plain text console. It was designed
by Richard Stallman and preceded the WWW.
......@@ -168,18 +168,18 @@ to Debian:
engine for newsgroups.
<p>For example, to find out what experiences people have had with
finding drivers for Promise controllers under Debian, try searching on
the phrase <tt>Promise Linux driver</tt>. This will show you all the
postings that contain these strings, i.e. those where people discussed
finding drivers for NVIDIA graphic cards under Debian, try searching
the phrase <tt>NVIDIA Linux driver</tt>. This will show you all the
posts that contain these strings, i.e. those where people discussed
these topics. If you add <tt>Debian</tt> to those search strings, you'll
also get the postings specifically related to Debian.
also get the posts specifically related to Debian.
<item>Any of the common web spidering engines, such as
<url id="http://www.altavista.com/" name="AltaVista"> or
<url id="https://duckduckgo.com/" name="DuckDuckGo"> or
<url id="http://www.google.com/" name="Google">, as long as you use
the right search terms.
<p>For example, searching on the string "cgi-perl" gives a more detailed
<p>For example, searching on the string "evince" gives a more detailed
explanation of this package than the brief description field in its
control file.
</list>
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