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 Our project also thanks Framasoft and the PeerTube community for developing
 PeerTube as a free and decentralized video platform.
 
-For its part, the Framasoft association warmly thanks the Debian project for
-contributing to the existence of PeerTube software, from ist own funds.
+The Framasoft association warmly thanks the Debian Project for
+its contribution, from its own funds, towards making PeerTube happen.
 
-This contribution has a twofold impact. On one hand, it is a strong mark of
-recognition from an international project, seen as a pillar of the Free and
-Open Source world, to a small french association providing tools for emancipation
-from monopolies held by the Web Giants. In the other hand, it is a significant
-assistance, in this difficult period, for funding the design of a tool belonging
-to all and useful for all.
+This contribution has a twofold impact. Firstly, it's a strong sign of 
+recognition from an international project - one of the pillars of the Free 
+Software world - towards a small French association which offers tools to
+liberate users from the clutches of the web's giant monopolies.
+Secondly, it's a substantial amount of help in these difficult times,
+supporting the development of a tool which equally belongs to and is useful to everyone.
 
-The strengh of this gesture by the Debian project demonstrates once again that
-solidarity, mutual aid and collaboration are values that allow our communities 
-to realise tools considered as utopian.
+The strength of Debian's gesture proves, once again, that 
+solidarity, mutual aid and collaboration are values which allow our communities
+to create tools to help us strive towards Utopia.