Some improvements to the text, thanks Phil Hands for the review

content/2020/debian-donation-peertube.md

 Title: Debian donation for Peertube development
 Slug: debian-donation-peertube
-Date: 2020-10-12 12:00
+Date: 2020-10-14 12:00
 Author: Louis-Philippe Véronneau, Pouhiou, Laura Arjona Reina
 Tags: debconf20, donation, fundraising, peertube
 Status: draft
 Lang: en
 
-DebConf is the annual conference for Debian contributors and users interested
-in improving Debian. Although originally planned to happen in person,
-this year's iteration, [DebConf20](https://debconf20.debconf.org/),
-had to be held online.
+The Debian project is happy to announce a donation of 10,000 USD to help
+[Framasoft](https://framasoft.org) reach the fourth stretch-goal of its
+[Peertube v3 crowdfunding campaign -- Live Streaming](https://joinpeertube.org/roadmap).
 
-While being a resounding success, DebConf20 made clear to the project our need
-to have a permanent live streaming infrastructure for small events held
-by local Debian groups. As such, [Peertube](https://joinpeertube.org/),
-a FOSS video hosting platform, seems to be the perfect solution for us.
+This year's iteration of the Debian annual conference,
+[DebConf20](https://debconf20.debconf.org/), had to be held online,
+and while being a resounding success, it made clear to the project our need
+to have a permanent live streaming infrastructure for small events held by local Debian groups.
+As such, [Peertube](https://joinpeertube.org/), a FLOSS video hosting platform,
+seems to be the perfect solution for us.
 
-The Debian project is thus happy to announce a donation of 10,000 USD,
-part of the DebConf20 and Debian funding,
-to help [Framasoft](https://framasoft.org) reach the fourth stretch-goal
-of its [Peertube v3 crowdfunding campaign -- Live Streaming](https://joinpeertube.org/roadmap).
-
-We hope this unusual gesture from the Debian project will help us make
-this year somewhat less terrible and give us better free software tooling
+We hope this unconventional gesture from the Debian project will help us make
+this year somewhat less terrible and give us, and thus humanity, better Free Software tooling
 to approach the future.
 
 Debian thanks the commitment of numerous Debian donors and DebConf sponsors,
@@ -30,3 +26,4 @@ particularly our DebConf20 Platinum Sponsors: Lenovo, Infomaniak, Google
 and Amazon Web Services (AWS).
 Our project also thanks Framasoft and the PeerTube community for developing
 PeerTube as a free and decentralized video platform.
+