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@@ -25,19 +25,18 @@ event_summary: Seven days of hacking including a three-day workshop to continue
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   <b>This is work in progress</b> and will be announced properly soon.
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-	  - fix all sentences 'will be', 'be decided', 'been opened', 'very soon', 'probably', 'yet', 'approx', 'do not'
-	  - morocco welcomes tourists very much
-	  - no vaccatinations required
 	  - a few more words about the venue, Priscilla, Queen of the Medina
 	  	mention mirage OS retreats
-	  - some better photos
-	  - explain venue is more like a youth hotel, though there are 10 beds in 5 rooms in the guesthouse next door. (the other 20 beds are in-house.
-	  - suggest alternate accomodation options nearby. There are plenty.
+		add something about marrakesh or are those links enough
+	  	explain venue is more like a youth hotel, though there are 10 beds in 5 rooms in the guesthouse next door. (the other 20 beds are in-house.
+	  	suggest alternate accomodation options nearby. There are plenty.
+		'Thus many of the landmarks of Marrakesh are in close walking distance.' - a few more words about Marrakesh
 	  - explain costs:
 		- 350e per week & person, that's 50e for accom & food & venue per day
 		- if you cannot pay, thats fine. if you(r company) can pay (this or less), great
 		- ask for 300e from people staying elsewhere (its also ok if they pay nothing or less)
 	  - registration deadline?
+	  - fix all sentences 'will be', 'be decided', 'been opened', 'very soon', 'probably', 'yet', 'approx', 'do not'
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 </p>
 
@@ -51,7 +50,7 @@ event_summary: Seven days of hacking including a three-day workshop to continue
 
 <h2>Goals</h2>
 <p>
-  As always, the exact content of the meeting will be shaped by the participants,
+  As in previous years, the exact content of the meeting will be shaped by the participants,
   these are our main goals as organizers:
 </p>
 <ul>
@@ -125,7 +124,7 @@ of Marrakesh</a> are in close walking distance.
 
 <h3>Other activities</h3>
 <p>
-  <em>To be organized by the attendees while in Marrakesh.</em> There are plenty of options and advice available, but other activities will need to be organized by the non-organizers, who would love to participate in an excursion to the mountains or the sea.
+  <em>To be organized</em> by the attendees while in Marrakesh. There are plenty of options and advice available, but other activities will need to be organized by the non-organizers, who would love to participate in an excursion to the mountains or the sea.
 </p>
 
 <h2>Code of Conduct</h2>