Commit 851fb318 authored by sajolida's avatar sajolida

Shorten and unify

- "Individual" as an adjective can mean "Existing as a distinct entity; separate"
- Ikiwiki links work without / at the end and we never put them
parent f98c5cb5
......@@ -218,6 +218,6 @@ Income statement for 2010
Partners
========
Grants, awards, corporate donations as well as substantial individual
donations that the Tails project has received are listed in a more
visual way on our [[partners page|partners/]].
Grants, awards, corporate donations, and substantial
donations from individuals are listed in a more
visual way on our [[partners page|partners]].
......@@ -382,6 +382,6 @@ permitted by law.</strong></p>
<div id="meet-partner" class="row">
<div class="col-md-12">
<h3>Our partners</h3>
<p>Tails also receives grants, awards, corporate donations as well as substantial individual donations. Meet our [[partners|partners/]] or [[become one of them|partners/become/]]!</p>
<p>Tails receives grants, awards, corporate donations, and substantial donations from individuals. Meet our [[partners|partners]] or [[become a partner|partners/become]]!</p>
</div>
</div>
......@@ -82,6 +82,6 @@ It aims at preserving your <strong>privacy</strong> and
<div id="home-partners" class="home-section">
<h1>Partners & Grants</h1>
<p>Tails has received many donations and grants from its' partners: corporations, organizations and individual donors.<br />
[[Meet our partners|partners/]] or [[become a partner|partners/become]] yourself!</p>
<p>Tails receives grants, corporate donations, and substantial donations from individuals.<br />
[[Meet our partners|partners]] or [[become a partner|partners/become]]!</p>
</div>
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