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Various changes to clarify, simplify or correct.

Andrei POPESCU requested to merge small-changes into master

en/upgrading.dbk

  • s/upgrade to 10/upgrade to Debian 10/ to make it clearer
  • pending actions: simplify the sentence
  • s/desktop systems/systems with graphical interface/ desktops are not the only systems with a GUI
  • use a kernel version in stretch as example ;)
  • use apt iso apt-cache whenever possible

en/whats-new.dbk

  • s/default apparmor package/apparmor package/ (what is a "default" package?)
  • "Recommends" already mentioned once, it's clearer to use the full meaning in the next sentence.
  • add <literal> to update-alternatives
  • add <literal> to -nft option
  • s/driverless/Driverless/ (start of title)
  • mention the A64+ instead of A64 twice ;)
  • s/and/or/ to make it clearer that only the video is accelerated
  • make it clearer which mainlining effort that is (Linux)
  • reorder the entry to provide (reference to) the rationale immediately after the suggestion to use usrmerge.
  • split the Calamares paragraph to make it easier to read and translate ;)
Edited by Andrei POPESCU

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